10/11,12【Day3&4】Let’s go to the finals and I try to interview for job

Hi,Hello!

In two days, I had a good experiences

Yesterday, I enjoyed playing soccer in QUT social soccer.
I played the goalkeeper, but I didn’t catch the shoot so I concede a first goal.
However, I was good at passing so I assisted to the goal. Finally,I won the game.

Next game is Finals so I want to win the game and be the champion!

Today, I tried to interview for job.
I was a little nervous but I tried to talk to manager.
After the interview,Fortunately I got the job of trial tomorrow.
I will take a chance, I will do my best.

以下がAI修正版

Hi, Hello!

In the last two days, I had some good experiences.

Yesterday, I enjoyed playing soccer in the QUT social soccer league. I played as the goalkeeper, but I couldn’t catch a shot, and we conceded the first goal. However, I was good at passing, so I assisted in scoring a goal. In the end, we won the game.

Our next game is the Finals, so I’m determined to win and become the champion!

Today, I tried to interview for a job. I was a little nervous, but I managed to talk to the manager. Fortunately, I got the job for a trial tomorrow. I’m going to take this opportunity and do my best.